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The thought police invade even real-estate advertising

Published 12-Jun-1994 in the Denver Post
Copyright ©1994 by Ed Quillen. All rights reserved.

The scourge of political correctness has reached the last bastion of American free speech -- real-estate advertising.

Some years ago, my friend B.J. Plasket (now the courthouse reporter at the Cañon City Daily Record) and I collaborated on an essay about how one should understand ads for mountain property.

For instance, if you see a phrase like Ski out your door, it really means the county doesn't plow this road in the winter.

Easy low monthly payments means the last three buyers failed to make their $39,000 balloon payments, too.

Towering moss-rock fireplace could mean no other source of heat.

Full amenities. To you, an amenity is a Jacuzzi or a sauna, but to the ad copywriter, an amenity might be indoor plumbing or electricity.

Secluded means no road within five miles.

Rustic means a path and a privy.

Water and sewer available means one of the neighbors had to drill only 450 feet at $29 a foot before hitting a pool of sulfurous brine that eats pipe, but even if the stuff tastes worse than flat beer, it's good for your health because it kills giardia.

It was fun to write, but unfortunately for us, any mountain publication that might have printed our work also carried acres of such advertising from the real-estate industry. Various editors said they enjoyed it, but they didn't want to bite the hands that fed them.

In the intervening years, the authorities have acted. Not to inject truth into blue-sky real-estate promotions and thus protect Americans from frauds and scams, but to insure that no one's feelings get hurt.

An article in the June 7 national weekly edition of the Washington Post explained the current sad situation, a result of good intentions gone too far.

The Fair Housing Act of 1968 forbade real-estate advertising with discriminatory phrases like whites only or Christian.

Fair enough. The act was amended in 1988 to include families and the handicapped; it is illegal to discriminate against either in the sale or rental of property.

As a landlord, I've got no quarrel with that. In fact, we always advertise children and pets welcome when we need a new tenant.

However, you've got to be careful how you advertise property these days. If someone is offended, or feels as though the ad is trying to steer a certain class of people away from the property, then there could be a complaint to state or local human rights commissions, regional HUD offices or the courts.

Some phrases that have inspired complaints:

Master bedroom suggests slavery. (It also sounds rather sexist, but I doubt we'll ever see Mistress bedroom in an ad.)

Walk-in closets implies that people in wheelchairs aren't welcome. Convenient to jogging trails can be construed as another way of discriminating against the handicapped.

Spectacular view could likewise imply that a blind person shouldn't consider the house. (But couldn't it also provide useful information to a potential buyer, as in If I'm blind, why should I pay a premium for a view, and so this won't be a good deal? Similarly, why pay to be near a jogging path if you don't jog?)

Most of these complaints come from Pennsylvania and Oregon, but doubtless someone will try it in Colorado. Local ads often boast of property with a mother-in-law house, and some single person can claim to feel excluded by the phrase, and therefore entitled to restitution from the cruel and insensitive folks at the realty and the newspaper office.

Even though we supposedly have freedom of speech and freedom of the press in this country, an assortment of government agencies now monitors real-estate advertising, looking for forbidden phrases.

The newspaper could be forced to pay damages after expensive litigation if it prints a forbidden phrase, and there's no way of telling in advance what will upset this new gaggle of thought police. Walking distance, Near synagogue, Happy Easter, executive living and quiet neighborhood have all provoked actions.

Is there a solution? Nobody should suffer from discrimination, but we're not talking about that here. We're talking about over-delicate souls who demand that society keep them from ever suffering from hurt feelings.

Our governments have their hands full trying to cope with real problems like drive-by shootings, starvation, dysfunctional schools and homelessness, and yet we're also supposed to devote resources to support some thought police just to prevent hurt feelings among the professionally sensitive?

George Orwell saw what was coming when he wrote 1984. He was just off by a decade.


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